Mandara no Jin Formation of Ten Thousand Snakes

neah wrote:Name:Mandara no Jin Formation of Ten Thousand Snakes
Rank: A
Specialty: Spacetime Ninjutsu
Resource Cost: 100
Handsigns: None Again, Haldseals
Duration: 3 posts (unless snakes are destroyed by A-rank jutsu) Remove "Unless destroyed by A Rnak jutsu, does not apply in this system)
Range: 20%
Power: 60%
Speed: 20%
Description: With this technique, ten thousand summoned snakes crawl out of the user's mouth and sleeves and hunt down the enemy. With such overwhelming numbers, a true "wall of snakes" is formed, making defense and evasion meaningless. The enemy can do nothing but become buried by the snakes. The snakes can bite the enemy with their poison fangs that will cause them great pain and cause their speed and go down by 15 points until treated, the snakes can open their mouths to extend Katana blades with B-rank sharpness, making them even more deadly. Furthermore, when the inexhaustibly crawling snakes gather together, they become a defensive wall, and can block any kind of attack of A-rank or lower the snakes will die essentially if an A-rank attack reaches them at the same time it's used to soak up the damage. Please reword this technique. I know you took it word for word from the wiki, but the wording is too godmod & indisputable. Also, redo the speed reduction from poison like how I showed you.
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Requirements: Snake contract